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Comments: (156) Comments Found!
Name: beaJuly 6, 2010 10:14:10 AM
Can I order here when the book comes out? :D if not, where can I buy the book? and how much? :DDD i really like the story :)))
Name: leslieMay 26, 2010 01:37:15 PM
i love it!!! tnxs s pagshare ng iyong story... super ganda..
Name: marlie lofranco cabrellesMay 16, 2010 07:45:57 AM
love the story. thanks. may part 2 ba?sana meron para completo ang saya hahahahaha
Name: wishApril 27, 2010 03:51:54 AM
loved the story. thanks. :)
Name: samanne_caApril 10, 2010 10:34:27 AM
Grabeh!!! Best talaga sa lahat ng best sana may part 2 ang ganda ng story talaga at madala katalaga sa story more power and goodluck!!!! CONGRATS ang ganda pagkasaulat
Name: YSH AdminApril 2, 2010 05:25:35 PM
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Name: KyliiMarch 23, 2010 08:35:43 PM
yipeeee may susunod uling story si ms aria! aantayin nmin ms aria khit matagal hehe
Name: loviMarch 23, 2010 06:59:40 PM
I love it!
Name: beaMarch 23, 2010 08:43:31 AM
wow! ang ganda ng story.. napaiyak ako sa pagbasa.. haaayyy.. congrats ms. aria! sana nga magkaroon ng story si nicanor.. ehe =)
Name: tinzzMarch 23, 2010 01:48:56 AM
Hello. Sana nga gawan mo rin ng story si Nicanor... Okey lng kahit matagalan ang posting.... wait na lng kami...
Name: emzzzrMarch 22, 2010 02:05:59 AM
bnasa q uli xa khapon... chap 10 nung kilig skit ouch n chap.... cute tlga noh
Name: RegieMarch 21, 2010 04:41:37 PM
aantayin ko ms Aria! :D
Name: ArianneMarch 21, 2010 11:11:42 AM
I'd probably make a lovestory for Nicanor, at least... since parang maraming me gusto na magkaroon sya ng storya... Pero tulad ng nasabi ko na, hindi ako sigurado kung kelan ako magsisimula uling magpost dito...
Name: ArianneMarch 21, 2010 11:09:09 AM
to kylii: Hindi ko pa po alam.I'm quite busy pa kasi as of the mo, so, I'm not sure if masusundan ko agad. I have unfinished manu's pero, they need alot of work pa...at hindi ko talaga maisisingit ngayon ang pagsusulat. I'm trying to fix my life, you see... :) But I'll try my best na masundan ang Indecent. Slamat nga pala sa pagbabasa...
Name: tinzzMarch 20, 2010 01:56:24 AM
ang ganda ng story ms aria. sana gawa ka ulit ng marami. tc...
Name: KyliiMarch 19, 2010 10:10:05 PM
na-miss ko ito.. sna may ka2loy.. miss Aria may susunod ka ba ulit na story?????????
Name: emzzzrMarch 19, 2010 01:10:32 AM
congratz ms. aria... cute story bitin lng me....... good job
Name: ponyangMarch 17, 2010 08:36:57 PM
...ganda naman....haha si nick naman!lol...hahahaha
Name: Garnet HeartMarch 17, 2010 05:28:10 PM
CONGRATULATIONS ARIA! You've brought in so many readers on this website. Andaming nag-abang sa story mo. Sana tuluy-tuloy ang pagsusulat mo ng magagandang stories. Thank you very much for being a part of YSH! We are very proud of you!
Name: charyMarch 17, 2010 08:37:31 AM
wow.. subra ng enjoy talaga ako sa story tnx ms.aria. :-) sana cna nicanor at alexanda naman para series ang dating.. pati c martha n rin.. ganda talaga.. tnx for sharing ur novel.. more power and God bless!!
Name: KCMarch 17, 2010 08:32:29 AM
ang ganda! the best ung story especially the author! :)
Name: HavenSentMarch 17, 2010 08:23:32 AM
yehey tapos ko na rin! inantay ko talagang matapos para di ako mabitin hehe. super super sa kilig at romance! thumbs up miss Aria!
Name: RegieMarch 17, 2010 08:17:18 AM
weee ganda ng ending kakakilig!!! gaing ni miss Aria! next story na pls :D
Name: samMarch 17, 2010 05:32:00 AM
gusto ko si Nicanor,maganda cguro story nya..haha..sana magawan xia ng kwento..i like him..hehe
Name: ArchaicMarch 17, 2010 04:36:59 AM
congratulations Aria! Ang ganda ng novel mo kaya naman andaming nag-abang. Keep it up and hopefully more stories to come.
Name: HopeMarch 17, 2010 02:44:31 AM
Aww, the end na. :( Congrats, Miss Aria!! This is a great novel. I love Batanes!! :)
Name: EMZZZMarch 17, 2010 02:06:26 AM
wew..bitin nman po.. gnda! congratz ms. aria;)
Name: aLLynMarch 17, 2010 01:11:12 AM
ang ganda ganda naman.. happy ending.. tnx ms. aria..
Name: wrell88March 17, 2010 12:07:10 AM
Isang story na naman ang nagwakas.. tnx to Aria for sharing! mula umpisa inabangan ko ito kaya medyo nakakalungkot na the end na pala :( But I'm sure na marami ka pang susunod na stories at aabangan ko ulit sila. More Power to you and to YSH!
Name: shining_starMarch 16, 2010 10:49:10 PM
hay ang ganda!!! sayang tapos na.. salamat kay Aria! sana sulat ka ulit ng bagong stories :)
Name: AriaMarch 16, 2010 02:42:47 PM
Helo po..Medyo matagal kong di nasubaybayan ang YSH, salamat po ulit ng marami sa mga nag-comment at patuloy na nagbabasa. Bukas na po ang ending ng story ko, sana po abangan ninyo. At sana po magustuhan ninyo... Salamat po ulit sa lahat ng nagbabasa at nag-aabang..And if you can, I'd love to hear what you think...Sige po. Enjoy reading.
Name: HopeMarch 16, 2010 03:51:36 AM
I love this, sayang matatapos na.. :( Congrats, Aria!! :D
Name: MikageMarch 15, 2010 03:23:12 PM
epilogue na pala ang kasunod! waaa matatapos na pala neto :(
Name: petpet86March 15, 2010 01:35:08 PM
next na!!! tagal pa ng wednesday :(
Name: emzzzMarch 15, 2010 09:11:35 AM
btin ending n pla sa wednesday mis ko sna magkaprt 2 n lng pra may msubaybayan.. ung emerald n ngcomment ngulat p q kla q nkacomment n q.. dats my real name...........;)
Name: KyliiMarch 15, 2010 08:36:01 AM
waaaa bitin na bitin! di ako maka-concentrate mag-review! gusto ko ng mabasa ung ka2loy niya!
Name: BenchMarch 15, 2010 08:02:45 AM
ay wala nang round 2? sige na nga... solve na ako dun :P
Name: EmeraldMarch 15, 2010 05:38:37 AM
ay *karma pala :)
Name: EmeraldMarch 15, 2010 05:38:12 AM
hay pride ng mga lalaki yan.. di nila matanggap na na-inlove sila sa taong kinukutya nila. yan ang sinasabi nilang karama :)
Name: J@zzYMarch 15, 2010 12:55:00 AM
naiiyak ako dito..ang lufet ni Alex kay Jas.. pero obvious naman labs din niya si Jas.
Name: dark_mistressMarch 14, 2010 10:04:02 PM
ayan na darating na si Alex! nae-excite ako sa susunod na mangyayari? malapit na ba ending nito?
Name: aLLynMarch 14, 2010 12:16:53 AM
wala pa dn chapter ngaun.. :( next chapter na po pls..pls..
Name: GeryMarch 12, 2010 11:27:43 PM
ika nga ng iba , pwedeng pang pinikakang tabing.. isa ito sa mga stories ng your story haven for me na talagang nag-uumapaw. Ang pinakainiyakan ko kasing story ay sa tuya siempre but when i read this one, mas lalong dumami na naman ang iniiyak ko which means mas heart warming, mas touching...but i'm not saying pinakamaganda itong story. maganda lahat ng story at writers ng YSH.. kaya lang,,.. itong story lng tlga ang gustung-gusto ko ngaun. super danda!
Name: SamanthaMarch 12, 2010 09:13:47 AM
Ang saya ni Bench! Sa wakas dumating din ang pinakahihintay niya haha.
Name: SusmehMarch 12, 2010 08:40:49 AM
sana nga magkaroon ng part 2 ang novel na 'to. galing ni Aria!
Name: shining_starMarch 12, 2010 08:19:27 AM
ang init ng love scene hehe. wala bang part 2?
Name: AriehleMarch 12, 2010 07:43:24 AM
Ba't umalis na agad si Alex???? Wala bang 2nd round????
Name: BenchMarch 12, 2010 07:29:26 AM
ayan na! kaso maiksi, pero puwede na rin :P
Name: emzzzMarch 12, 2010 04:08:07 AM
well cguro ngulat lng tlga si Alex bka kc virgin p pla si jASmene? ehh..joke lng pro prang gnun nga.. asar... tgal p ng monday
Name: MikageMarch 12, 2010 03:46:37 AM
ang galing galing ni miss Aria! sana sulat ulit siya ng novel pagkatapos nito. ganda!
Name: RegieMarch 12, 2010 01:46:05 AM
wow! eto ang the best episode
Name: krizzzyMarch 10, 2010 06:31:50 AM
ang ganda ganda ganda ganda! walang kasing ganda! tnx Aria! Pinasaya mo ang araw ko. Sana nga lang may katuloy na :)
Name: CarolineMarch 10, 2010 05:41:46 AM
yehey, nabasa ko na. Kumpleto na naman ang araw ko!
Name: cybMarch 10, 2010 04:48:47 AM
Hay ang mga lalake tlga d mo maintindihan ang takbo ng isip..Alex is an example of them.dinla nya si Jasmene tpos hahayaan nya lang mphiya..Ano ito part of his plan..hmp
Name: TraceurMarch 10, 2010 04:15:38 AM
ano ba kasing binabalak ni Alex at dinala siya sa pugad ng mga hypocrites? Tapos di man lang siya ipagtanggol? Hay naku! Ba't puro bad na lang ang mga male characters ng mga nobela? :P
Name: emzzzrMarch 10, 2010 02:50:34 AM
i don't see the point of Alex kung bkit ginanon niya si jasmene..okay namn nung una... baliw nd in tlga...........;)
Name: SissieMarch 10, 2010 02:25:20 AM
Inggit lang yang mga yan kasi mga pangit sila hehe.
Name: ArchaicMarch 9, 2010 11:38:51 PM
It's really hard kung nadungisan ang reputasyon mo. It would take a struggle to gain back people's respect once again. Thanks Aria for sharing your story :)
Name: dark_mistressMarch 8, 2010 01:50:22 PM
ang haba-haba-haba ng chapter na 'to.. sna lhat ng chapters ganito kahaba hehe. salamat ulit miss Aria!
Name: benchesMarch 8, 2010 01:14:08 PM
Nabasa ko ang teaser and I find it very interesting. One of this day ay babasahin ko ang nobela. Kanya-kanya lang namang views iyan. May satisfied at may di masyado satisfied. Still, I would like to congratulate Aria for her effort and I'm sure proud siya dito dahil pinaghirapan niya ito at ginawa niya ang nobelang ito from her heart.
Name: KyliiMarch 8, 2010 12:18:15 PM
my best chapter :D
Name: cozycooMarch 8, 2010 11:59:11 AM
ay bastos! censored hehe. joke lng po miss Aria! i like dis chap :D
Name: SissieMarch 8, 2010 10:48:34 AM
lalala inosente rin ako haha. uu nga bitin :D
Name: MikageMarch 8, 2010 08:23:28 AM
ano po ung crown???? hehehehe
Name: BenchMarch 8, 2010 08:10:49 AM
andun na nga!!!!!! ba't binitin paaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!
Name: CarolineMarch 8, 2010 04:41:15 AM
weeeeeeee ang sweet! favorite part ko 'to :D tnx Aria! Kahit di ako nakakapagcomment parati, lagi ko itong inaabangan
Name: RegieMarch 8, 2010 02:17:38 AM
waaaaaa nakakabitin ang kilig! next naaahhhhh!
Name: KatkatMarch 7, 2010 10:03:23 PM
haaayyy na miss ko 2. paganda ata ng paganda ang nangyayari :) luv it!
Name: dark_mistressMarch 5, 2010 05:05:02 PM
hi miss Aria! kami nga ang dapat mag-thank you kc kinukumpleto mo ang araw namin. hindi talaga ako natutulog kapag di ako nakapagbasa dito. ang galing mo. i'm sure someday magiging sikat kang writer :)
Name: ArianneMarch 5, 2010 01:51:17 PM
Sa lahat po nang patuloy na sumusubaybay at nag-aabang, sa lahat po ng mga nagbibilang ng oras until the next chapter, sa lahat po ng walang-sawang nagbibigay ng kani-kanilang mga comments, kada chapter... from the bottom of my heart...MARAMING SALAMAT PO. Thank you for giving me the inspiration to keep on writing. And for letting me know that in some small way, I have made you happy. Thank you po ulit.
Name: ArianneMarch 5, 2010 01:46:51 PM
Naaaliw ako kay Bench. Pasensya na at lagi kitang nadi-disappoint. :) Despite that, 'wag ka sanang magsawang mag-abang sa mga susunod na chapters.. Malay mo naman diba, meron pa la 'yong hinihintay mo... :)
Name: KyliiMarch 5, 2010 08:44:12 AM
ayan nagkakaigihan na ang mga lovers.. si Carlo ba magiging third party? sana sila na lang ni martha ahahaha lol
Name: petpet86March 5, 2010 07:53:21 AM
hay nakakainlab si alex kahit medyo mahirap cyang pakisamahan. beneath his cold personality, there's a sweetness within him :)
Name: cybMarch 5, 2010 04:48:13 AM
nakakakilig nmn ang chapter n ito..sna my nxt chapter na..
Name: BrionesMarch 5, 2010 04:31:49 AM
ganyan lang talaga ang mga mahilig :D *joke Bench* natatawa lng ako sa'yo. Anyway, again tnx to Aria. You're really good. Keep it up!
Name: BenchMarch 5, 2010 02:13:33 AM
ahHHHH di ako naiintriga! maiintriga ako kapag may magandang nangyari :P
Name: SamanthaMarch 5, 2010 01:46:07 AM
naku wala pa rin talaga yung inaantay ni Bench haha. wag mo lang cya pansinin miss Aria. basta kami inaabangan namin itong story mo bawat posting. nakakaintriga hehe
Name: TraceurMarch 5, 2010 01:29:19 AM
ay bitin! sayang ang ganda pa naman. tagal pa ng monday haayyy :(
Name: emzzzMarch 4, 2010 04:39:43 AM
konting oras n lng fri nnman post n uli ng indecent......:)
Name: dark_mistressMarch 3, 2010 03:40:34 PM
umiinit na ang eksena dito. galing ni ate Aria! di talaga ako makatulog pag di ako nakapagbasa ng kahit 1 chapter eh hehe. tnx!
Name: =k00l@Id=March 3, 2010 12:45:13 PM
waaaa! ganda ganda din ng kwento nito! ilang chapter ba to? parang matagal pa ending eh hehe
Name: KyliiMarch 3, 2010 11:59:33 AM
ano bang salita nila sa Bataan?
Name: RaileyMarch 3, 2010 11:34:15 AM
weeeee galing galing talaga ni miss Aria! ang lalalim ng mga words niya. nahihirapan akong intindihin hehe. pang best writer award. grabe ang ganda!
Name: petpet86March 3, 2010 11:12:32 AM
go go go Aria! super galing mo talagang magsulat! yaaayyyy, can't wait for the next chapter!
Name: MoniqueMarch 3, 2010 10:34:56 AM
naku bench wala na ata talaga ung inaantay moh! punta ka na lang sa porn sites haha............ tnx pala kay miss Aria. ang ganda ng chapter na 2
Name: BenchMarch 3, 2010 10:15:42 AM
ganun lang yun? wala pa rin? *sigh sigh sigh* ng 100 times
Name: AlundraMarch 3, 2010 09:57:22 AM
super ganda... gusto ko na mabasa ung katuloy niya. parang nasa climax na kc eh :P
Name: MysticleMarch 3, 2010 09:42:57 AM
I'm glad na naligaw ako dito. Ang gaganda pala ng mga stories dito sa YSH. Parang yung mga binabasa ko rin sa phr. Sayang nga lang nabitin ako dito. Di ko alam na may schedule pala ng posting :) Thumbs up Aria. Ang galing mo.
Name: cybMarch 3, 2010 04:37:53 AM
nakaka touch nmn ang chapter n ito..mbsa n nga yung next chapter...
Name: danMarch 3, 2010 03:39:05 AM
nxt chap.....
Name: MJMarch 2, 2010 08:43:34 PM
naku inabangan talaga. ayan in-update ko na. medyo natagalan si miss Rebecca kasi kung anu-anong pinaggagawan niya sa website :)
Name: yanMarch 2, 2010 08:04:44 PM
bat ganun ayaw po lumabas ng chap 6?meron namang pong nka lagay sa homepage??...hehe
Name: arelMarch 2, 2010 03:17:29 PM
bakit wala pang chap 6?
Name: genevieveMarch 1, 2010 11:27:43 PM
its awesome.......very interesting ang umpisa niya...wow superb ganda talaga.....congrats ....and thank you
Name: KatkatMarch 1, 2010 04:17:43 PM
mas magaganda ang mga stories dito at mas magagaling ang mga writers. Saludo ako sa YSH! You're the best! *thumbs up!*
Name: ArianneMarch 1, 2010 10:09:17 AM
Nasamid naman ako d'on...ay ganun, well...hintayin talaga n'ya, malay n'yo...meron... :D
Name: MikageMarch 1, 2010 08:59:31 AM
can't wait na to read the continuation! ang ganda talaga nito :)
Name: dark_mistressFebruary 28, 2010 06:01:48 PM
yung love scene daw miss Aria! tagal na niya inaabangan :)
Name: ArianneFebruary 28, 2010 05:58:13 PM
Matanong ko lang si Bench, ano po ba ang hinihintay ninyo?
Name: dark_mistressFebruary 28, 2010 05:49:57 PM
Bench, wag ka na mag-alala mukang next chapter na hehe. ako rin aabangan ko yun :)
Name: krizzzyFebruary 28, 2010 03:38:56 PM
mega sa ganda! naiiyak akong naeexcite! basta maganda xah!!! luv it! gratz Aria!
Name: yenFebruary 28, 2010 10:32:55 AM
excellent... dying to see the next chapter! my god! so heart warming,,,touching...
Name: petpet86February 28, 2010 07:24:40 AM
itoh........ang pinaka the BEST novel ever!!!
Name: KyliiFebruary 28, 2010 06:39:24 AM
haaayy... antay na naman ng next chapter!
Name: CarolineFebruary 28, 2010 06:12:13 AM
the best si miss Aria! ang galing galing niya!!! ang ganda!
Name: BenchFebruary 28, 2010 06:03:15 AM
WALA PA RIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!! Kelan ba talaga????????? tagal ko na nag-aabang eh!
Name: MoniqueFebruary 28, 2010 03:12:12 AM
hay ang sungit talaga ni Alex lagi na lang niya pinapahiya si Jasmene. galing mo miss Aria! thumbs up!
Name: Rebecca RosalFebruary 28, 2010 02:30:55 AM
Nagkamali ng posting dito sa Indecent Proposal kaya wala pong posting bukas. Ang chapter 6 po ay sa Wednesday pa maipo-post.
Name: RegieFebruary 28, 2010 02:22:33 AM
di ba MWF ang sked nito? Ba't nai-post ngayon? :D
Name: jace_caleFebruary 27, 2010 11:08:21 AM
bakit wala pa ang chapter 5...onwards???
Name: JewelFebruary 27, 2010 06:22:45 AM
I'm so thrilled with the story. Can't wait to see what happens next :)
Name: ponyangFebruary 27, 2010 04:28:08 AM
next chap please...haha i go to this site everyday to wait for the update..lol...kahit may pasok kami sa school..haha ginagamit ko yung laptop namin para dito...and the thing is..they don mind coz theyre clueless...they dont understand wats written on this website..lol..ahaha..up up..haha
Name: Romantic_GirlFebruary 26, 2010 03:35:40 PM
waaaaaaa nabitin ako!!!!! ano na mangyayari? seryoso ba talaga si Alex sa indecent niyang proposal??? hay.. kabitin talga!
Name: BrionesFebruary 26, 2010 08:35:58 AM
Inaabangan ko ito everyday pero kung minsan tinatamad akong mag-iwan ng comments. From the news it seems that YSH takes the comments very importantly. oo nga naman... writers deserve to be acknowledged. mahirap ding magsulat. to Aria, thank u for this wonderful novel. ang galing mo, promise!
Name: MikageFebruary 26, 2010 08:13:53 AM
wooooooo! exciting na ang part! next chapter na!!!!!!!!!!!
Name: KyliiFebruary 26, 2010 07:35:09 AM
di ko alam kung maaawa ako kay Jasmene o maiinggit.. i'm sure naman malalalman din ni Alex ang totoo about her and dat will make a difference sa impression niya sa kanya :)
Name: MoniqueFebruary 26, 2010 07:25:01 AM
siempre bench bitin pa rin hanggang matapos hehe
Name: BenchFebruary 26, 2010 06:20:52 AM
ang tagal naman! akala ko yun na yun! next chapter cguro yun na :D next chap naman cguro di na ako mabibitin???
Name: MeganFebruary 26, 2010 02:04:18 AM
nice nice.. next chappie na =P
Name: ZetteFebruary 26, 2010 01:32:38 AM
Super rich ng guy! ang sarap mangarap... how i wish they really exist ^_^
Name: Pretty EyesFebruary 24, 2010 03:28:52 PM
super galing ni miss Aria! nakakaiyak ang story niya.. i can't help but feel pity to jasmene :( If only Alex knew what she's going through
Name: MeganFebruary 24, 2010 09:57:13 AM
ganda!!! next chap na! :D
Name: MonicaFebruary 24, 2010 09:10:53 AM
Nice... maganda pla story nito.. nung una kc parang boring. congrats Aria! keep it up!
Name: KyliiFebruary 24, 2010 07:27:54 AM
hay... life... si jasmene na cguro ang pinakamalas na nilalang sa mundo... lahat na lang ata tina-take advantage ang situation niya. hay, how sad :(
Name: Romantic_GirlFebruary 24, 2010 06:50:34 AM
nakakaiyak... mega senti tuloy ako dito sa office :D
Name: BenchFebruary 24, 2010 04:36:55 AM
Ayaaaannn! malapit na ang romantic part! parang feel ko na ang next chapter nito :) wag lang bitin ha!
Name: SissieFebruary 24, 2010 02:41:27 AM
asus! puro mga demonyo ang mga nakapaligid kay jasmene. wla na bang matino?
Name: dark_mistressFebruary 23, 2010 05:37:00 PM
i love this story.. nakakatouch ang struggle ni jasmene for her brother. super galing ni Aria na magsulat... really :)
Name: =k00l@Id=February 22, 2010 10:04:32 AM
GALING!!! next chapter na hehe.. gratz Aria! Keep it up!
Name: MeganFebruary 22, 2010 09:09:36 AM
katanga ng lalaking yan.. nainiwala nman xah sa hipokrita niyang mudra.
Name: CarolineFebruary 22, 2010 06:32:27 AM
Di ako maka-relate.. ang tindi ng inglesan nila.. wala bng translation? hehehe. joke lng po. galing po ninyo miss Aria!
Name: BenchFebruary 22, 2010 04:22:28 AM
ay oo nga nag meet na rin ang dalawang bida.. eskandaloso't eskandalosa naman sila... lahat ata ng love story hindi maganda ang first meeting ng mga lovers hehe.
Name: RegieFebruary 21, 2010 10:27:46 PM
kadiri ng dirty old man yuck! wawa naman si Jasmene, binabastos cya.
Name: SissieFebruary 21, 2010 10:00:50 PM
ayan Bench, nagkita na cla ^_^
Name: AriaFebruary 21, 2010 11:53:59 AM
'Wag po kayong mag-alala, malapit na 'yong hinihintay ninyo. :D Nagpapasalamat po ako kasi kahit papaano, me makaka-appreciate din pala ng ginawa ko. Your comments really are an inspiration. Hayaan niyo, pagbubutihin ko pa sa susunod. Kaya ;ang, tulad nga po ng sinasabi ko, masyado pa'ng maaga para husgahan ako. Ipagpatuloy niyo lang po sana ang pagbabasa. Sana po magustuhan niyo sya 'til the very last page. :D
Name: cozycooFebruary 21, 2010 08:25:11 AM
ay.... kala ko ngayon continuation nito MWF pala hehehe. wait na lang ako ulit tomorrow.. tnx nga pala kay Miss Aria. galing po ninyong sumulat :P
Name: RegieFebruary 21, 2010 02:18:15 AM
Hello miss Aria! ang ganda po ng story ninyo kaso nabibitin kmi. Eto inaantay nmin ung romantic part niya hehehe. galing po ninyo. thumbs up po :)
Name: AriaFebruary 19, 2010 02:55:51 PM
hello po..pasensya na po ngayon lang ako naka-reply sa mga comments ninyo. Kahapon ko lang kasi nalaman na natanggap ang pinasa ko.. :D anyway, salamat po sa magandang feedbacks. Alam ko'ng medyo mahaba yong storya, pagpasensyahan niyo na po. This was the very first story I did. At medyo confused pa ako kung paano aatakihin ang story-telling ko. Anyway, thank you talaga. Constructive Criticism would be much appreciated. Chapter 1 pa lang kasi ang lumabas, so maaga para husgahan ako. I hope I don't disappoint all of you.. Happy reading!
Name: MikageFebruary 19, 2010 09:16:20 AM
waaaaaaaa! ang ganda! pero bitin ako! antay na naman ng Saturday *sigh*
Name: wrell88February 19, 2010 08:34:59 AM
ganda! next chapter na! =P
Name: RegieFebruary 19, 2010 08:10:17 AM
taray ng donya! di ba siya sasabunutan ni Jasmene? hehe tnx Arianne! I like ur story.
Name: CarolineFebruary 19, 2010 07:36:18 AM
andaming bago dito sa YSH. di ko alam kung ano uunahin ko basahin. ganda nito. gud luck kay Arianne. salamat sa pagshare mo ng iyong story.
Name: SissieFebruary 19, 2010 06:20:57 AM
ako rin gusto ko na ng romance.. matagal pa ba? hehe
Name: CeciliaFebruary 19, 2010 05:56:13 AM
pang pinilakang tabing :) maganda naman cya. magaling magsulat si Arianne. one of the best online writers na cguro. pro prang stereo type na kc ung character ng donya. but anyway, it's too early pa pra husgaan ko 2. unique nman ang teaser nya so i'm sure we'll get to the heart of the story soon.
Name: BenchFebruary 19, 2010 05:21:57 AM
Bakit para yatang star cinema nitetch errrrrr cinema max pala... ay! ano ba yan? kung anu-ano sinasabi ko. ba't naman ksi si donya demetria ang naka-focus? gusto ko na ng romance. antagal namang magkita nina jasmene at ni prince charming!
Name: SusmehFebruary 19, 2010 04:23:12 AM
ang lufeeeeetttttt! Tama ba 'yun? may langit at lupa ba dito sa earth eh lahat naman tayo nakatapak sa lufa... hay naku, na-carried away ako! ang galing kasi ni Aria ^_^
Name: GraceyFebruary 18, 2010 08:21:32 PM
ang galing ng writer neto. published writer ba sumulat neto? ang galing kasi niya. saludo ako :)
Name: wrell88February 18, 2010 06:05:35 PM
uso talaga ngaun ang rich guy-poor girl love team.. but i still enjoy reading them. ang galing Arianne! Thumbs up!
Name: KateyFebruary 18, 2010 09:19:57 AM
galing mo Arianne! I also like ur name! Eager na ako sa katuloy nito.
Name: SissieFebruary 17, 2010 06:07:45 AM
wow! ang gaganda ng mga bagong stories.. next na!
Name: ArchaicFebruary 17, 2010 04:50:21 AM
Another talented author na nman sa YSH! Bilib talaga ako sa inyo. Ang galing mo Arianne! Keep it up!
Name: EmeraldFebruary 17, 2010 04:37:05 AM
masyado namang nagger na asawa yan. ako rin di ko matatagalan pag ganyan hehe.. regards kay Arianne Khael, i think u're a good writer. the best talaga ang mga YSH authors! God bless u all!
Name: BrionesFebruary 16, 2010 10:32:12 PM
interesting ang umpisa niya.. i'm sure maganda 2 :)
Name: desert_roseFebruary 15, 2010 11:39:51 AM
nakaka-struck ung title niya... parang pelikula =P
Name: ElmzFebruary 14, 2010 05:05:32 AM
WWWOOOOOOWWWWW! Daming bagoooo! excited na ako! simulan na natin!!! weeeeee!
Name: GraceyFebruary 14, 2010 04:20:13 AM
wow ganda ng teaser at cover! andaming new authors and YSH, exciting! eto talaga ang gusto ko ng mabasa! haaay, sana feb 17 na hehe
 
 

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